dijous, 23 d’octubre del 2008

letter for a fax

To: Paradise marketing ç

From: Jean-Jacques Giradoux


Fax: (004441) 232 386651
Fax/Tel: (0033 1) 24 783242

Date: 17 October No. of pages: one
FAO: Ms M Collins, Humanes Resources
Re: Work experience placement



Dear Ms Collins,

Thank you so much for having accepted my request. When I knew that, I had been accepted for the placement in Paradise Marketing.
I was really delighted.
Now I have to organize accommodation for my stay, and I don't know if you could help me.
Could you book a room fo me at a good hotel near the conference site?
I'm looking forward to heaving from you.
Thank you again.

Yours faithfully,


For Patricia Trujillo.

1 comentari:

  1. Patri, You need to write an e-mail or letter,too.
    Also, you should correct the mistakes I've marked IN CAPITAL LETTERS.
    Be aware of the format. leave spaces!!!


    To: Paradise marketing

    From: Jean-Jacques Giradoux

    Fax: (004441) 232 386651
    Fax/Tel: (0033 1) 24 783242
    Date: 17 October No. of pages: one
    FAO: Ms M Collins, Humanes Resources
    Re: Work experience placement



    Dear Ms Collins,

    Thank you so much for having accepted MY ...... When I knew that I HAD been accepted for the placement in Paradise Marketing.
    I.......stay, and I don't KNOW if you could help me. COULD YOU BOOK A ROOM FOR ME AT A GOOD HOTEL NEAR THE CONFERENCE SITE?
    I'm looking forward to heaRing from you.
    Thank you again.

    Yours faithfully,

    PATRICIA TRUJILLO
    .........

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